I feel happy about my writing.
I hear people yelling and screaming.
I saw people staring at me in awe.
I felt dizzy and sick.
I wondered if I will feel scared.
Thursday, March 19, 2020
Ferris Wheel
Yesterday we wrote about going on the Ferris Wheel. We wrote about what we could see, feel, hear and smell. A lot of the words I wrote had 'ing' on the end and were descriptive words. I used capital letters. Here is my Writing.
I feel happy about my writing.
I feel happy about my writing.
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Hello Laiseni. You have used some good descriptive words.Well done. I think I would be screaming too as I don't like heights.I would rather keep my feet on the ground. Have you ever been on a ferris wheel yourself?.I haven't been on one but I have been on a merry go round.
ReplyDeleteHi Laiseni. I'm just saying hi! I miss seeing your smiley face every day.I hope you are doing ok in your bubble!I really like your descriptive writing. Well done.The word awe is a great word. Can you describe what it means?
ReplyDeletethank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteHello Laiseni. I hope you are having fun and getting out and about in the sun. I have been going for long walks with my daughter and Salt,my dog.
ReplyDeleteWhat have you been doing?.I look forward to hearing from you.
Hi Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteLater on I will be taking my dog for a walk.Then I will be picking some flowers for my neighbour.
What will you be doing today?.I look forward to hearing from you.
Good morning Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your family are all well and having fun these holidays.I can't wait to see what you have been doing.
Take care and have a super week.
Good morning Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a super week.I would love to hear how your holidays are going.I hope to hear from you soon.
Good morning Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI hope that you are having a good holidays
thank you
DeleteGood afternoon Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what you have been doing these holidays.
Have a great weekend and I hope to see you Monday,via the computer.
Good morning Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your family had a great weekend.I look forward to seeing what work you have been doing.Take care and have a super week.
Hello Laiseni.I can't wait to hear about what you have been doing during the holidays.I hope all is going well for you.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Hello Laiseni.I hope you have a great weekend.Take care and have a wonderful weekend.
ReplyDeleteGood morning Laiseni.Just wishing you a happy week.Take care and keep safe.All the best.
ReplyDeleteHello Laiseni.I was just checking your blog to see if you had added any work.Have a great week.Take care and keep safe.
ReplyDeleteHello Laiseni.I can't wait for school to start so we can hear what you have been doing during these long holidays.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if you had put any more learning onto your blog.I will check again soon.
Have a great day.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment so you know I have had a look at your blog today.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI am checking all the blogs in room 11 tonight so I am leaving a comment to let you know that I have looked at your blog.Have a great week.