Kia ora readers today l am going to share my first draft of some writing to school our teacher gave us some instructions to writing about how we mere feeling about back to school. I feel good about my writing. What could I do to improve my writing?
The night before school went back after lockdown i was happy. I missed school because i couldn’t do maths.
When i woke up in the morning i was feeling happy and excited. I got dressed and had breakfast and waited to go to school. When I walked to school I was Excited.
When i come through the gate i saw my friend and Mrs Cassidy.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteIt's been great seeing your smiling face as you come in through the school gates.I enjoy the friendly good mornings,it fills my bucket.
What have you missed most about school?.
Greetings Mrs Cassidy, I missed school because I couldn't learn.Thank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteHello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteThank you for getting my name correct in your blog.Some children often call me Miss Cassidy.
Have a great week.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.
Hello Laiseni.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what other learning you have been doing in class.
Have a great holiday.