Kia ora readers today l am going to share my first draft of some writing to school our teacher gave us some instructions to writing about how we mere feeling about back to school. I feel good about my writing. What could I do to improve my writing?
The night before school went back after lockdown i was happy. I missed school because i couldn’t do maths.
When i woke up in the morning i was feeling happy and excited. I got dressed and had breakfast and waited to go to school. When I walked to school I was Excited.
When i come through the gate i saw my friend and Mrs Cassidy.
