Last time press Alliance coming to squared us Stop people running in hiding from the lion The lion roars la visa scam The Lone Star shooting people People Australia on our way from The Lion The Lion King Me and my friend was lying from Hey my friend listening how to answer on a fish is coming and look for Alliance my something hidin Me and my Mum's room . The lion sauce The lion guard my friend I saw a bike I want to ride bike and was not chasing me eating my friend I want funny I met under back in bathroom I want to my cousin's off my cousin was The baby 7de I heard some noise the baby was crying Watch my dad had Dad edible I can eat sushi I can eat chicken nugget I can eat rice I can eat Fergus I can fish rice I can eat chicken nugget I can eat main course I can eat kiwi fruit I can eat hot peppers I can eat orange I can eat kiwi fruit I can eat Tube I can eat I can eat chicken
Wednesday, November 27, 2019
the lion
Last time press Alliance coming to squared us Stop people running in hiding from the lion The lion roars la visa scam The Lone Star shooting people People Australia on our way from The Lion The Lion King Me and my friend was lying from Hey my friend listening how to answer on a fish is coming and look for Alliance my something hidin Me and my Mum's room . The lion sauce The lion guard my friend I saw a bike I want to ride bike and was not chasing me eating my friend I want funny I met under back in bathroom I want to my cousin's off my cousin was The baby 7de I heard some noise the baby was crying Watch my dad had Dad edible I can eat sushi I can eat chicken nugget I can eat rice I can eat Fergus I can fish rice I can eat chicken nugget I can eat main course I can eat kiwi fruit I can eat hot peppers I can eat orange I can eat kiwi fruit I can eat Tube I can eat I can eat chicken
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Hello Laiseni, It's me Krystallynna.
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing that you have done. I can tell that you worked so hard on this story. It reminds me of the movie call the lion king bye the title. Next time try to make the writing a little bit bigger. I have a question. How long did you wrote this. Have a good day bye now.
Hi Laiseni! It is Santannah,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you didn't gave up but their only one problem.. Some of them didn't made sense!I'm sorry I did not understand. that all for today! Bye!