Yesterday we wrote about going on the Ferris Wheel. We wrote about what we could see, feel, hear and smell. A lot of the words I wrote had 'ing' on the end and were descriptive words. I used capital letters. Here is my Writing.
I feel happy about my writing.
I hear people yelling and screaming.
I saw people staring at me in awe.
I felt dizzy and sick.
I wondered if I will feel scared.